To the moderator:
This article should clarify and not confuse between elevator and escalator.
Headline: "Schindler elevator accident"
First line: "escalator accident at a supermarket"
2nd paragraph: "gap between the escalator’s handrail"
last line: "building code when they installed the elevator in 2005"
I think, 2 times elevator should be corrected to escalator.
Moderator:
Thanks for the correction of the headline.
Now, please correct the last line from
"... when they installed the elevator in 2005."
to
"... when they installed the escalator in 2005."
3 Comments
electric2004 at 06:50 PM JST - 5th April
To the moderator: This article should clarify and not confuse between elevator and escalator. Headline: "Schindler elevator accident" First line: "escalator accident at a supermarket" 2nd paragraph: "gap between the escalator’s handrail" last line: "building code when they installed the elevator in 2005"
I think, 2 times elevator should be corrected to escalator.
electric2004 at 10:44 PM JST - 5th April
Moderator: Thanks for the correction of the headline. Now, please correct the last line from "... when they installed the elevator in 2005." to "... when they installed the escalator in 2005."
electric2004 at 11:47 PM JST - 6th April
Moderator: Thank you so much for the corrections.
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